Two wonder day

As I wake up in the morning my teeth start to shiver

I hear the raindrops dripping on my ceiling

I get out of bed then start to freeze

Once I see my lunch I suddenly sneeze

When I walk out the door I feel nauseous and ill

As my sickness gets to me I become depressed.  

As I wake up I feel energetic and fearless

I skip around the house helpful and bright.

As I get my lunch and gallop out the door I see birds chirping and sun behind the hill

As i'm walking school I see the bright blue sky and sunny sun.

This week we have been learning about poetry. We learnt how to make senses and words rhyme and we learnt how to use juxtaposition the definition for juxtaposition is to join two opposites together such as the clock watched over me and the TV stared right back at me. Tai and I made this poem based on how we get ready for school and we learnt a lot while making this poem we learnt how to use powerful words and to make words and scenes rhyme.