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Thursday, March 29, 2018

Explanation Writing Plan



Point
What is the point you are wanting to make?
Example/Evidence
Back your thinking up with examples       
Explain
Explain how the evidence supports your thinking
Link
Write a sentence that links to the point you are making or `the next paragraph.


Title
What is your Explanation about?
How is Chinese New Year Celebrated?
Introduction
What are you going to explain?  Why is it important for us to pay attention to what you have to say?
KUNG HEI FAT CHOI! ( Happy New Year) Did you know that Chinese New Year is a very important time of the year, because that’s when everyone comes together. They come together to eat traditional food with their families. Have you ever wondered why Chinese people Celebrate Chinese New Year?
Information Paragraph One
Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Chinese people believe that there was a legend about a monster called Meyn. The monster Meyn only comes out in the darkest night  of the full moon and when the full moon is in a disguise. Meyn would sneak into the village and scare the people and the animals.
Information Paragraph Two
Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
But one day there was a man, that taught them Meyns weakness. Meyns weakness was loud noises, Fire and the colour Red. One day Meyn came back and when he got there he was frightened, because the people we're wearing red clothes head to toe and drumming the dram loudly, and they lit up all the firecracker they had.
Information Paragraph Three
Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Instead of wrapped gifts that they give on christmas, kids get red envelopes stuffed with lucky money in it from, grandparents, parents and many more. The happy fact is that kids are allowed to spend their money as much as they like
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
Other countries might not have Chinese New Years as a public holiday, but they still celebrate on roads and in the cities.

Thursday, March 22, 2018

Stephen Hawking

                     

Sadly Stephen Hawking as past away last week but we will not forget all the work he as done and the things that he made possible. Tiava, Jonathan and I have created this presentation to show the thing that we have learnt about Stephen Hawking. He was know as the most intelligent man in the world. For this task we focused on using our own words and attributing images. 

Monday, March 19, 2018

Winter Olympics - 5 main ideas


Today Julian and I made a 5 main idea DLO based on the 1928 winter Olympics. We the site graphic news  to find our five main points. In the 1928 winter Olympics a lady from Norway she set a record for being the youngest lady to win a figure skating challenge.